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effie tait: hi carol, just seing if i can do this..thought my smoke alarm was the laptop having a nervous breakdown...F xxxx
Destiny: Hi Carol-- I found this nifty little area too. I liked the story and plan on reading the book! You will autograph it for me won't you? Des
Poppy: Liiiiike the new colors! Vibrant and fresh! Good Job!
Margaret B.: Happy Thanksgiving MacDaniels Clan! from the Biernbaums we'll be over for desert!
Livie: Oh Carol! I have found a new toy. I like how I can stop by and drop in a line or two! Now I can pester you for installments all day long and there is nothing you can do about it! Olivia
Chase & Jordan: Hey Carol-It was the thrill of our life to finally meet you and Steve. Can't decide which one of you we have crushes on. LOL! Let's see more blogging and excerpts please. This story is way too good to let stand still. Chase and Jordan
Danny: hey Kiddo--I know I have teased you about your love of football in the past, but I like your post and admire your presentation. You're a pretty cool chick and Steve is a lucky guy to be able to share football with ya.Here's hoping it all turns out fair. For the record, I am not sure whether or not the Blades can avoid being relegated either, but you are all right about the fine being a mere drop in the ocean. It's just wrong. D.
Louise S.: I think you are so interesting. I have begun to make it a habit to come in here to see what you are up to. Looking forward to more BEHIND THE WALL!
Linda: Carol --I've come in here to read BTW and love the excerpts you've chosen. It was great to see you both in Scotland again (And the kids - how they've all grown!) - even though the circumstances were so sad. You were awesome for Steve at the funeral. I am proud of you. He's a lucky man to have you and I believe he will get through this. With you at his side how can he not.
Rick: CarolPlease extend my condolances to Stve and all your family on the loss of your father in law. I know it ia hard right now, so if i don't get to read you for a while, I'll be thinking of you. Rick
Teej---: Carol and SteveYou know we're here for you if you need anything at all. Grandy was a wonderful man and he will be missed by everyone who knew him.Teej and Deej
Elizabeth: Oh Carol, I am so very sorry to learn of Steve's dad's passing. I am sure it is a very painful time for you and yours. Please accept my sincerest condolances.Eliz
Bea: Carol -\Plase extend my sincerest condolances to Steve on the loss of his dad. I know how much it hurts and how you all loved him. He did sound like a wonderful man and he certainly raised a wonderful son. If you guys need anything... If there is anying I can do...Bea
Danny: Carol-Sorry to hear about Steve's father passing. I can't imagine how much it must hurt. S.
Carol: Danny! You can be so unkind! Does this mean you are happy to see someone hurtin'? LOLFirst of all, he is not MY Sean Bean - Second of all, although his last two films may not have been his best, his performances in both of them were outstanding; I trust you made note of that. Lastly, I saw the game yesterday and truly felt bad about it. There is something fundamentally wrong with how all this was attained by West Ham and I am not so sure I trust what the outcome will be... It has made for
Danny: Hey Carol, Looks like your Sean Bean is having a rough go of it lately. Two bad movies and yesterday his team lost Premiership.
Louise: Carol I stumbled in here on Wednesday evening and have loved every minute. You have a real no nonsense way of writing that I happen to like very much. Terrific job. (Oh and I like your taste in men too. Sean Bean is definitely a hottie!)
Elizabeth: Yeah, Carol, post about your wonderful marriage. We do all want to know. What's your secret for keeping things so tight between you and Steve all these years. Most of the time, I can't stand my husband! LOL.
Carol: Thanks for the remarks everyone - Please remember that the excerpts are very raw. What I have prepared now for the book is infinately more polished... Odds botkins, I love youz!Carol
Bea: Oh Carol, I want to be you! What is your secret for getting on so well for so long with your Steve. We all want to know!
Elizabeth: Carol this is terrific. I am so happy for you! I love the excerpts you have chosen (and I can say that because I know where this is going!) Your time has come and I am so excited to be here to see it all unfold for you!Love you!Elizabeth
TJ: You went to see Christopher Plummer and Brian Dennehey? Why you no good low down... I am SO JEALOUS! I love them both! Still, nobody deserves a wonderful night out more than you, lady!JT
Bea: Hi Carol. Good to see Madison County Event restored. I thought it had fallen off the book.
Ria: Carol this is brilliant! I am amazed at your creativity!
Leah: I love your latest. Perfect Muse. You are so freakin' funny!
Marian: This is really great, Carol! Kudos, kiddo!~ :D
DCH: Ah! As soon as you mentioned Sean Bean, I kind of figured you'd had him in mind for your character. (Which character I'm not certain yet; there seems to be several incorporated in the story -- Steve, Logan and Jamie . . .) I'll read it again! I've known how great Sean Bean is since the first time I saw the "Sharp" series on the History Channel years ago . . and just had to own the videos (now a set of DVDs as well!). I love the Sharp character and Sean is absolutely perfect in that role!
Bea: JEEPERS! How did I miss this?!Terrific stuff, even in its roughest form. I cannot wait to see the final product, m'dear! TJ is right; you MUST finish it! And YOU are right; it IS the best thing you have ever done. How clever you are! INDEED!
Chase: I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE! You make me want to be Logan!Chase
Ricky: Hey you! Been reading more Logan. Congrats on rekindling your love affair with Bean! LOLSeriously, Carol, it's damn good!
Carol: Thanks D and all... No, Rick, I have not seen it. I am not inclined to scare myself senseless... LOLCarol
Danny: I love this. Your excerpts from BTW are awesome. I am thrilled for you, Kiddo! Don't let the shock of catching Bean out of his element befuddle you; you're better than that. Loved Madison COUnty Event too! As you would say, it's Good Stuff. Cheers babe.D-man
Rick: You scare me. Have you seen Hitcher? Damn!
Barb -: I am left speechless. But in a good way.
Bea: Girlfriend you are something else. This is awesome tho I am surprised you are sharing it. Is our old fashioned girl going to join the millinium and start blogging?

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Saturday, January 15th 2005

6:49 PM

CARLOS RETURNS... Sort of...

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Raging Bulls

 

By now Ben had arrived and jumped from Buck's back. He stood in front of his amigo grabbed his shoulders and glared sternly into his eyes. “Carlos! What are you doing?”

“I have warned him many times, Ben, about being alone with Isabella… especially away from the homestead. Now I will show him that I mean what I have said.”


Carlos looked down at Adam and shouted as he nodded his head, shook Ben’s hands off his shoulders and moved to the left shoving Ben aside so he could move towards Adam again, “You treat my sister as if she is common! I could kill you!”

Ben stepped in once again as Carlos lunged towards Adam but this time Carlos was like a charging bull. Ben had a hold of Carlos’ arms and, in an instant, the younger man had pushed himself into Ben. As the two men stood chest to chest with only Ben's hands between them, Carlos reached up and grabbed Ben’s hands pulling them down and to his right literally yanking Ben out of his way. Ben recovered himself quickly and rose to the momentum of the assault by grabbing Carlos right arm and pulling. As Carlos pivoted, Ben came up with his left fist making contact with Carlos’ jaw. Carlos let out a shriek, spun around and came back with an unexpected backhand to Ben’s face causing Ben to spin completely around. He would have fallen to the ground if Buck had not been right there. As Ben crashed into Buck, he grabbed onto the stirrup to steady himself. He paused for only a moment to catch his breath and turned back around just in time to see Carlos again heading towards Adam. With a look of exasperation, Ben stooped low and ran towards Carlos grabbing him from behind and tackling him to the ground which caused the two of them to tumble and roll down the embankment and into the water. They continued fighting in the water throwing punches and falling with each attempt to knock the other down. They pushed and tugged and swung at one another dunking each other until they were completely exhausted. Finally, when they could barely stand, they came to a draw. Facing each other, both men were swaying and breathing heavily. Carlos was about to throw one more blow when Ben raised his right hand and leaned forward, his left hand on his thigh as he lowered his head. Shaking it from side to side, he offered that he had had enough.

Carlos stood up straight, nodded and said that that was good. He moved toward Ben and leaned in to support him. Then, they, two friends, leaned on each other as they slowly emerged from the water.

Ben looked at Carlos’ chin and winced, “You ok?”

“Yeah, I’ll be ok. You ok?” Carlos responded breathlessly.

“Yeah.”

Scanning the baron shoreline, Carlos squinted then smiled as he queried, “Where are Adam and Isabella?”

“Guess they went home.” Ben's lack of concern was evident in his tone.

Carlos was clearly distracted by the water rushing past his legs as he headed for dry ground. “I guess they did.”

Ben stopped. “Water is nice.”

Carlos continued toward the shoreline. “Yeah.”

“I feel like staying in it for a while.”

Looking back at Ben, Carlos once again revealed his playful side, “Me too.”

But they didn't.

The two men emerged from the water and dropped down on the ground. Carlos reclined on his back propped up by his elbows, crossed his legs and mumbled about needing new boots anyway. Ben lay on his side facing Carlos and propped himself up on only one elbow while having no choice but to agree that their boots were done.

Cuping his hand over the left side of his face, Ben proclaimed his increasing discomfort. "Dangit! I think you gave me a black eye!”

Carlos, chewing on nothing, retorted, “Yeah. You made me bite my tongue. Twice.”

Ben took his hand away and smiled at his friend. “You scared the daylights out of them, you know.”

Carlos laughed, “Yeah, I know.”

Ben began to chuckle as he shook his head lightheartedly, “You scared the daylights out of me!”

Carlos' smile widened taking over his entire face, “Yeah, I know.”

After sharing a laugh at each others' expense, the two men rested there in silence.

Ben gazed into the distance and grunted as he stood up, yanking his shirt from his trousers and wringing it out at the waist. “We have a lot of work to do.”

Undaunted, Carlos mumbled, “Yeah, I know.”

But Ben had no intention of surrendering their fun just yet! "Last one in the water has to explain to Hop Sing what happened to our clothes…!”



To be continued...

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